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À̳ª Many people believe that- (¸¹Àº »ç¶÷µéÀÌ -¶ó°í ¹Ï´Â´Ù) µî ÀÏ

 

 

 

 

¹ÝÀûÀÎ »çȸ Åë³äÀ» ¹è°æÀ¸·Î µµÀÔÇϸ鼭 ¿îÀ» ¶¾´Ù. ÀÌ¾î ´ëÁÖÁ¦¹®¿¡

 

 

 

¼­´Â I agree/disagree that- (³ª´Â -¿¡ Âù¼º/¹Ý´ëÇÑ´Ù), I question

 

 

 

whether- (³ª´Â -ÀÎÁö Àǹ®½º·´´Ù), My view on this issue is that-

 

 

 

 

(ÀÌ ¹®Á¦¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ³ªÀÇ »ý°¢Àº -ÀÌ´Ù), From my

 

 

 

 

point of view, ¶Ç´Â In my opinion (³» »ý°¢À¸·Î´Â), I strongly

 

 

 

 

support idea of- (³ª´Â -¶ó´Â »ý°¢¿¡ ÀüÀûÀ¸·Î Âù¼ºÇÑ´Ù) µî Áú¹®¿¡

 

 

 

 

´ëÇÑ ÀÚ½ÅÀÇ ÀÇ°ßÀ» Á¦½ÃÇÏ°í º»·ÐÀÇ Á᫐ ³»¿ëÀÎ ÀÌÀ¯ µÎ

 

 

 

 

°¡Áö¸¦ ÇÔ²² ¾ê±âÇÑ´Ù.

 

 

 

 

 ±×·¯³ª ÁÖ¾îÁø ¿¡¼¼ÀÌ ÅäÇÈ°ú ¿¬°üµÈ ÀÚ½ÅÀÇ ÁÖº¯Àâ±â³ª ¼Ó´ã, °Ý¾ð,

 

 

 

½Ã»çÇö¾È µîÀ» ÀοëÇϸé ä

 

 

 

 

Á¡ÀÚÀÇ °ü½ÉÀ» ²ø¾î º¸´Ù ³ôÀº Á¡¼ö¸¦ ¹ÞÀ» ¼ö ÀÖ´Ù. ÇÇ°Ü¿äÁ¤ ±è¿¬¾Æ

 

 

 

°¡ °í³­µµ ¿¬±âÀÎ ¡®Æ®¸®Çà ¾×¼¿¡¯À» ÅëÇØ ¾ò´Â °¡»êÁ¡ À̶ó°í ÇÒ±î?

 

 

 

¸Ó¸´ ¼Ó¿¡ Á¤¸®µÈ ¼­·ÐÀÌ Àß Ç®·Á¾ß º»¹®, °á·ÐÀÌ ¼ú¼ú ³ª¿Â

 

 

 

 

´Ù. µµÀԺι®À» ¿µ¾î·Î ³¬½Ã¹Ù´Ã·Îµµ ÅëÇÏ´Â 'hook' À̶ó°í ºÎ¸£´Â ÀÌ

 

 

 

À¯µµ ¿©±â¿¡ ÀÖ´Ù. ¹°°í±â°¡ ³¬½Ã¹Ù´Ã¿¡ ÀÔÁúÀ» ÇÏ°Ô²û À¯È¤Çؼ­ Àâ¾Æ

 

 

 

¾ß ¸ÀÀÖ´Â ¸Å¿îÅÁÀ» ²ú¿©¸ÔÁö ¾Ê°Ú´Â°¡? 

 

 

 

 

º»·ÐÀº ÈçÈ÷ ¡°First, First of all, Above all, To start with, To

 

 

 

 

begin with, ¶ó´Â ¼ÒÁÖÁ¦¹® 1·Î ½ÃÀÛÇÑ´Ù. ÀϹÝÀû Áø¼ú(As- )À̳ª, ÀÚ

 

 

 

½ÅÀÇ °æÇè(From my personal experience, -) µîÀ» ±¸Ã¼Àû ±Ù°Å 1, 2

 

 

 

·Î Á¦½ÃÇÑ´Ù. ½Å¹®±â»ç(According to the newspaper, -) ³ª Åë°èÀÚ·á

 

 

 

 

(Studies show that-) µîÀ» Àοë,¿¹½ÃÇÑ´Ù. ¼ÒÁÖÁ¦¹® 2´Â¡±Second,

 

 

 

 

Also, Next, Moreover, Another reason, In addition,

 

 

 

 

On top of that. Furthermore, Additionally, What's more·Î ½ÃÀÛÇØ ±¸

 

 

 

üÀû ±Ù°Å 1,2¸¦ Á¦½ÃÇÑ´Ù.

 

 

 

 

°á·ÐÀº "In conclusion, To sum up/In summary, In short/In brief,

 

 

 

All things considered-(¸ðµç °ÍÀ» °í·ÁÇÒ ¶§-), On the whole, all in

 

 

 

 

all·Î ½ÃÀÛÇØ ¿ä¾à/Á¤¸®¿Í ÇÔ²² ±ÛÀ» ¸Î´Â´Ù.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 ¡°»óȲº° ÁÖÁ¦º° Ç¥Çöµµ öÀúÈ÷ ¼÷ÁöÇؾߡ±

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÀÌ °°Àº ¿¡¼¼ÀÌ ±âº» ±¸Á¶µµ »óȲº°, ÁÖÁ¦º° Ç¥ÇöÀ» öÀúÇÏ°Ô ¼÷ÁöÇß´Ù

 

 

 

 

°í °¡Á¤ÇßÀ» ¶§ °¡´ÉÇÑ ÀÏÀÌ´Ù.

 

 

 

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to B, I strongly believe that ÁÖ¾î+µ¿»ç, Given the choice between

 

 

 

A and B, I would choose- Compared to-, ÁÖ¾î+ µ¿»ç, In contrast,

 

 

 

The advantages of - far outweigh the disadvantages µîÀÌ´Ù.

 

 

 

¶ÇÇÑ Àΰú, ÁÖÀå, Á¶°Ç°¡Àå Ç¥Çö¿¡´Â As a result, ÁÖ¾î+µ¿»ç, For

 

 

 

this reason, In this sense, If I were up to me, I would µ¿»ç¿øÇü,

 

 

 

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specific, From my experience, For instance, On top of that, Not

 

 

 

only, but also, Studies have indicated that, As old saying

 

 

 

goes, As I have mentioned, Last but not least-, (¸¶Áö¸·À¸·Î Áß¿äÇÑ

 

 

 

 

°ÍÀº-ÀÌ´Ù) µîÀÌ´Ù.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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µí, ¹®À屸Á¶ÀÇ ÀÌÇØ¿Í ÇÔ²² Çаú ¿Ü È°µ¿ (extracurricular

 

 

 

 

activities), ÀüÀα³À°(a well-rounded education), ½ÃÇàÂø¿À

 

 

 

 

 

(trial and error) µî°ú °°Àº ÁÖÁ¦¿Í ¿¬°üµÈ ´Ù¾çÇÑ Ç¥ÇöÀ» ¾Ë°í ÀÖ¾î

 

 

 

 

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